I am looking for feedback on the main setting. as of right now I am aiming for a high + dark fantasy book from the perspective of tribal orcs. This is partially inspired by David Dalgish's "half orc" series.
A book from the perspective of a pair of tribal orcs witnessing the "fellowship of the hammer", a dwarven movement that seeks to take over the entire world, and genocide non-dwarves out of existence.
"Come, and ride through a land of gold
Together we'll crush the world
On the hills a new kingdom is rising
In the fire of the smithy it's born
And smithed by the anvil strong
With the hammer it has been forged
Through the clans of the dwarves reunited
The new blood of the realm now flows"
by VaccinatedClarinet