I am at Chapter 13. I cannot take it anymore, I need to write this out, and hope someone will agree. Freaking god the writing. Hacking is written in the most sweat, edgy, Hollywood smelling way. Ugh. Both Zade and Daya just whip out their device, use the IP address, type some more, and boom the government's secrets are out and the dark web is right there. For heaven's sake, if the writer wanted to make it such a reoccuring theme, they could have at least done some research! This is like having a doctor protagonist, and then writing it off every time like "he did some sewing and sterilizing and then the patient was all healed". Also Daya and Addie in general are so cringe. They talk and behave like 8th graders. At one point of the book I actually laughed and thought "how is Adeline not a kid?" because it is so damned childish. Calling each other "b!tch" and "baby" then laughing at it. The joke about how Daya said "d!ck prick" which means "d!ck d!ck". Ugh god help. It's such a 13 year's old's fanfiction on wattpad vibe, and I am offending the actually talented 13 year olds by this. I will NEVER listen to booktok again.
by Meh040515