There will literally be a funeral and suddenly out of nowhere you’ll here the narrator say for example “ Ayane wore a black silk dress that decorated her bosoms”
I swear I’ve not gone five pages without a random description of a women’s bosoms it’s ridiculous actually!
I have no idea why the author does it makes it sound as if I’m reading smut at times
by Johhnyfailedhistest
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r/MenWritingWomen
Double take when I thought this read Pikachu. Carry on.