I just finished this book, and I found it very entertaining! I’ve seen a lot of discourse on this book already, so I wanted to get my more random thoughts out there:
-Was it just me, or did anyone else think the story was going to involve COVID? I think the only date mentioned throughout the entire story is March 2020, when Adele publishes her takedown of June’s Mother Witch with evidence. I thought this was foreshadowing that news of the pandemic was going to take over the media, and June’s scandal would be quickly forgotten because of it, ironically being saved by this disease that originated in China and that resulted in a spike in Asian hate crimes. I really don’t understand why the author included the date March 2020 otherwise….
-I guess I have to chalk this up to June’s unreliable narration, but I got confused about how Athena said her WWI project was “finally finished,” and it’s emphasized how she doesn’t let anyone see her work until she’s completely done with it (she asks June to read it, meaning she’s done with it for sure), but then June goes on to say it was not done at all and had a bunch of empty spots that Athena was gonna fill in later etc, etc.
-June also starts by saying how amazing the manuscript is and better than she could ever write in her lifetime, but this then becomes “it needed a ton of work” to “it was utterly unpublishable” lmao
-As insufferable and terrible as June is, I found myself rooting for her to get away with it… that is, until Mother Witch. At first, I thought it was completely fine that she was taking inspiration from that one paragraph Athena wrote. I didn’t even think that paragraph was good (maybe I’m just not a literary scholar but it felt too vague and random to be interesting to me). But then it turns out June put that paragraph word for word into her opening????? JUNE WHY
-I’m not sure if this was intentional (to maybe show that June’s not actually that good of a writer) or publisher error or stylistic choice by the author, but were there like… a ton of grammatical errors with the semicolons? Or do I just not know my punctuations lol?
Examples:
Geoff seems inordinately angry; far angrier than this response justifies.
\^ should be a comma?
Sometimes her face is contorted in grotesque expressions; eyes wide, tongue wagging.
\^ shouldn’t this be a colon instead of semicolon?
-All of June’s publishing team and friends advise her to keep her head down and not respond to any of the allegations, and I know this is good advice for the most part, but I think not addressing allegations AT ALL makes you look suuuuuper guilty. I think June’s best bet would’ve been to issue one professionally written statement denying any of the allegations and then not speaking on it again, which is exactly what she ends up doing (later on) that initially turns the public back in her favor! (before the new Mother Witch scandal) Yes I know June had to make sure her “detractors” had no solid proof against her before putting out any statements, but her team who thought she was fully innocent didn’t know that and still was advising her to say absolutely nothing. Idk, in my eyes, people who get accused of something terrible and don’t address it at all are basically admitting their guilt with their silence.
-Speaking of, why do the characters keep insisting that June shouldn’t be bothered by all these accusations as long as she’s innocent? IF June were innocent, then she should be REALLY bothered that her name and career are getting dragged through the mud over something she didn’t do. Who would possibly not be bothered by that?? She was literally losing connections and deals over it and people were treating her meanly.
-June literally says she wouldn’t know how to explain to Eden why Athena’s new Instagram post bothers her without having to admit that she’s struggling with guilt from stealing. GIRL WHAT DO YOU MEAN. Someone hacked your dead friend’s account, posted creepy photos of her being alive, targeted you directly–THAT’S NOT ENOUGH REASON TO BE BOTHERED?? GUILTY OR NOT?
-I’m confused about the timeline after Mother Witch’s release. It says Adele’s blog was posted 2 weeks after its release, and by the end of the month, Brett’s saying it’s “been awhile” since June worked on a new book. It’s been…. a month….? That feels really short idk
-Was Patricia Liu’s comment about “Athena would never write something like that” supposed to lead to something? I felt like that hinted heavily at an upcoming reveal into Athena’s family dynamics but just got dropped
-Look, I get why Candice wanted revenge for getting fired, but seriously? She really thought leaving a one star review under her own full name and profile, for an author whose project she directly worked on, wouldn’t hurt her professionally? Come on.
-How the hell did Candice convincingly photoshop multiple pictures of Athena where she was literally choking herself and lunging at the camera lmao?? And I’m assuming she got some recordings of Athena’s voice to play at the Exorcist steps and spoke herself whenever her recordings didn’t fit.
-June isn’t driven by her passion for writing. She’s driven by the idea of being famous and successful. She says herself that writing was only fun before she got to know how the publishing industry eats you alive, so if that’s how she feels, she SHOULD be happy to pursue a regular stable income job and write in her free time instead, away from the publishing industry. But of course, that wouldn’t yield her fame and fortune and envious glares from her colleagues, so she’d rather continue to dig her grave even deeper with the Athena scandal.
-I saw a lot of people were disappointed by the ending because we don’t get to see June get punished but idk, I think we did? We spend the entirety of the novel in June’s head so we know firsthand that she’s… a mess. She is so deeply insecure and perpetually miserable, and she doesn’t have enough self awareness to ever change that (though I do find it interesting how she will call out her own insecurities and projections and how things are her fault… But then always jump back into victimhood). On top of that, she DOES get dragged online and takes hits to her career like crazy for half the book, and she’s gonna continue to get dragged once Candice releases her book. She’s definitely faced her punishment; she just has the audacity to keep going lmao.
by incrediblydeadinside