I feel like the writing has gotten marginally better further into the book, and the plot is very interesting to me so that helps. But the world building feels lazy (has some contradictory points) and the grammar is not good. The author also doesn’t know what the word “exponentially” means and the editor didn’t catch that.
This book is an easy read but I dont think it lives up to the hype at all. It could have been so much better if the author was more skilled or had a better editor.
by onethousanddonkeys
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Check out Fireborne by Rosaria Munda (first book in The Aurelian Cycle series) Similar concept, much better execution. It is YA but the writing still feels more mature to me than FW.