My first novel

Hi there! I started writing this book 2 years ago, and shortly after my life was turned upside down and I had to rebuild. Now I finally have an opportunity to get back to it. I would love for anyone willing to give it a read, to maybe also give me some feedback. Please see below for an excerpt and a link to it (in the comments). TIA to anyone willing to give it a go!

“He’s not dead?” She asked, clearly relieved she didn’t have to worry about that. I just nodded back at her, her face suddenly turning back into that beautiful smiling piece of heaven. “Well then thank god you got him to shut up.” she chuckled as Caleb picked up Robert. “Caleb!” Lindsey hollered towards him. He turned around to see her and she continued. “Just leave him here, he’ll be way more embarrassed to wake up on our lawn than his own.” Lindsey said, chuckling. “Also you should take his clothes off and throw them up that tree.” she finished as she turned on her heel and walked back into the house, leaving the front door wide open. 

I was stunned, did she really just say that? I think that is the funniest thing i’ve ever met. If I didn’t already think our mate was perfect, I sure do now! I look over to Caleb who is smiling like the cat who ate the canary. We both just stare at each other and then start laughing. 

“Well, Alpha, what do you say to that?” Caleb questioned as I composed myself. 

“Do as your future Luna says.” I say with a chuckle as I turn back around and follow the direction Lindsey took off in.

by sexxibubblegums420